once upon a time ...short story --by me

THE WIFE SAID THAT SHE HAD THE SAME IMPRESSION ABOUT THE STRANGER AND THAT SHE DIDN'T BELIEVE HIS STORY EITHER BUT SHE ASKED THE FATHER TO BE MORE CAREFUL
. THEY WENT TO SLEEP .
NEXT MORNING WHEN THEY WOKE UP THE MAN WAS GONE BUT DIDN'T TAKE HIS SACK WITH HIM . THE LITTLE BOY TRIED TO OPEN IT BUT HIS FATHER PREVENTED HIM AND HE TOOK THE SACK AND HID IT IN HIS CASE.
WHEN THE MOTHER FETCHED FOR HER NECKLACE , SHE DIDN'T FIND IT . SHE WENT OUT SCREAMING
--DID ANY ONE SEE MY NECKLACE?? I PUT IT IN MY BOX

TO BE CONTINUED

Thanx TAIF
I'm prosecuting
=D>=D>

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المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة الع ـوام ـ Mـى

Thanx TAIF
I'm prosecuting
=D>=D>

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OH;;) THANKS SOOOOOOOOO MUCH 3AWAMY --BELIEVE ME IT'S A PLEASURE TO ME WHEN YOU READ WHAT I WRITE I'M REALLY HONORED

THE WIFE FELT VERY SAD AND MISREABLE SINCE SHE WAS PLANNING TO SELL THE NECKLACE AND TO HELP HER HUSBAND PAY FOR HIS DEBT AND SAVE THEIR HOUSE BY PAYING THE MORTGAGE WHICH WAS ON IT
THE FATHER WAS SHOCKED AND HE KNEW THAT IT WAS THE STRANGE VISITOR WHO STOLE THE MOTHER'S NECKLACE
HE FELT SO UNHAPPY AND WENT OUT TO LOOK FOR THE STRANGER BUT UNFORTUNATELY , HE FOUND NOTHING
SO HE WENT BACK HOME

HE WENT TO HIS ROOM AND CLOSED THE DOOR BEHIND HIM.
HIS WIFE FOLLOWED HIM AND THEY DIDN'T TALK AT ALL.
THEY THOUGHT THAT NOW THEY NEEDED TO SELL THEIR HOUSE TO PAY THE MORTGAGE .
THEY FELT DEEPLY SAD AND TOLD THEIR CHILDREN TO BE READY TO LEAVE THE HOUSE .
THE CHILDREN WERE SO SAD AND STARTED CRYING .
NEXT MORNING WHILE THEY WERE PACKING THEIR THINGS.......................

hi,hi,hi
I'm waiting
and sad for her necklace
Thanks prencess TAIF
=D>=D>

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المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة الع ـوام ـ Mـى

hi,hi,hi
I'm waiting
and sad for her necklace
Thanks prencess TAIF
=D>=D>

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THANKS 3AWAMI I REALLY DON'T KNOW HOW TO THANK YOU

THEY SAW SOMEONE APPROACHING THEIR HOUSE . THE LITTLE BOY WAS SO SCARED THAT IT WAS THE STRANGER SO HE STARTED SCREAMING

IT'S THE STRANGER

IT'S THE STRANGER

THE FATHER RAN QUICKLY TOWARDS HIM AND HELD HIM FROM HIS SHIRT AND WANTED TO BEAT HIM.
THE STRANGER THEN SHOUTED

WAIT ...WAIT

LISTEN TO ME
I'LL TELL YOU EVERYTHING

JUST LET ME SIT AND BRING ME A GLASS OF WATER

HE DRANK THEN LOOKED AT THE OWNER OF THE HOUSE AND ASKED HIM

WHERE IS YOUR FATHER

HE WAS SURPRISED FROM THE QUESTION AND SAID .....
MY FATHER WAS SENT TO PRISON 10 YEARS AGO

THE STRANGER THEN ASKED

COULD YOU TELL ME WHY

NO ! IT'S NOT YOUR BUISNESS

THE STRANGER THEN SAID

OK ...I KNOW YOUR FATHER'S STORY ..HE WAS SENT TO PRISON BECAUSE HE STOLE SOME MONEY

NO ! THE MAN SHOUTED ..HE DIDN'T STEAL THEM ..THEY WERE STOLEN FROM OUR HOUSE
THE PEOPLE IN THE VILLAGE USED TO SAVE MONEY WITH MY FATHER IN ORDER TO BUILD A FACTORY BUT MY FATHER LOST THEM SO HE WAS IMPRISONED

COULD YOU TELL ME MORE ? THE STRANGER ASKED

OK ..I' LL TELL YOU EVERYTHING BUT FIRST YOU HAVE TO TELL ME WHO YOU ARE

OK SON I'LL TELL YOU

I USED TO BE THE GUARD OF THE PRISON AND I LIKED YOUR FATHER AND I WAS SURE THAT HE WAS INNOCENT SO BY THE TIME WE BECAME VERY CLOSE FRIENDS
ONE DAY HE TOLD ME HIS STORY AND I FELT SO SAD FOR HIM

HE SAID THAT HIS SON --THAT IS YOU --USED TO TRUST EVERY ONE AND THAT HE WARNED YOU TO BE MORE CAREFUL FROM STRANGERS BUT YOU NEVER LISTENED TO HIS ADVICE

ONE DAY A STRANGER VISITED YOU AND YOU LET HIM IN SO HE STOLE THE MONEY WHICH YOUR FATHER HID FOR THE VILLAGERS SO THEY ACCUSED HIM AND HE WAS SENT TO PRISON FOR 15 YEARS

YOUR FATHER WANTED TO MAKE SURE THAT YOU LEARNED SOMETHING FROM WHAT HAPPENED
HE GOT SO ILL AND BEFORE HE DIED HE ASKED ME TO SEE IF YOU ARE OK NOW AND IF YOU ARE MORE CAREFUL NOW

SO I DECIDED TO MAKE THIS TRICK ON YOU

UNFORTUENATLY YOU DIDN'T CHANGE AT ALL AND YOU STILL TRUST STRANGERS

LISTEN TO ME SON --IT'S OK TO HELP PEOPLE BUT YOU SHOULD BE MORE CAREFUL

THE FAMILY LISTENED TO THE STRANGER'S WORDS AND APPROVED

AND NOW--SAID THE STRANGER-- BRING ME MY SACK
I HAVE A SURPRISE FROM YOUR FATHER

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WoW .. really wow
what a story .. bravo Teif
i though in the begining it's just an INDIAN MOVIE that all of us saw before
but this one is cool
=D>=D>=D>=D>
but i have a question .. how did the stranger know the owner of that house
didn' open his sack or sell its things
anyway i'm waiting for the rest
:)
YAAAAA RAB
:D