once upon a time ...short story --by me

ALSALLAM 3ALIKOM

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THE STRANGE VISITOR
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ONCE UPON A TIME , THERE WAS A VERY HAPPY FAMILY WHO LIVED PEACEFULLY AND HAPPILY . THEY WERE SO CONTENT WITH WHAT ALLAH BESTOWED THEM .THERE WERE TWO BOYS , A GIRL AND THE PARENTS . THE FATHER WAS A COLLIER . THEY WERE POOR BUT SO HAPPY

ONE DAY , SOMEONE KNOCKED AT THEIR DOOR . THE MOTHER WAS SO SCARED AND HER HEART STATED BEATING FAST . SHE WAS WORRIED BUT DIDN'T UNDERSTAND WHY THAT FEELING OCCURRED TO HER.
THE LITTLE BOY WENT QUICKLY TO OPEN THE DOOR . HIS MOTHER TRIED TO STOP HIM . BUT THE FATHER LOOKED AT HER AND WAS SO ASTONISHED FROM HER BEHAVIOR SO SHE LET THE BOY OPEN THE DOOR
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TO BE CONTINUED
TAIF 3ABER

Hey come on
TO BE CONTINUED
I thought i would read the end .. then u wrote that
anyway thankx 4 ur topic and waiting to see who knocked that door
thankx Teif
:)

Hey come on
TO BE CONTINUED
I thought i would read the end .. then u wrote that
anyway thankx 4 ur topic and waiting to see who knocked that door
thankx Teif
:)

:)):)):))

ok --I promise you that you'll read it soon

may be after a month from now:D:D:D thanx Ahmad

when the boy opened the door , a strange looking man was standing there , he was carrying a sack on his back . the man asked for some water to drink , the boy was so scared from the man. He went quickly to his father and told him about the man's request. The father gave the man water . After he drank it , he asked for some food.The father asked the man to get in the house and to have a rest.
he sat on a chair and put the sack beside him . They gave him food and while he was eating the father asked him where he was from....

to be continued

The man was disturbed and awkward from the question and said

--I'm not from this town .I am a stranger and I came here to buy some necessary things for my shop

--The father wished the man good luck and asked him hf he needed help
the stranger looked at the father and said
--- yes ! could I stay here for this night only
--The father felt embarrassed and agreed
he led the stranger to a small room and gave him a blanket then he closed the door behind him and went to rest
the father looked at his wife and asked her

--do you think this man is telling the truth ?? I don't like his story and I don't think he is telling the truth


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to be continued

To be late is better than never comming
Thanks TAIF
I'm so interrested your story
and w8
=D>=D>

Thanks For Your Story

God Bless,

اقتباس:

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المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة الع ـوام ـ Mـى

To be late is better than never comming
Thanks TAIF
I'm so interrested your story
and w8
=D>=D>

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thanks a lot 3awami for passing by ---I'm soooo happy that you enjoyed it
it's a pleasure for me really

اقتباس:

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المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة علي مدكور

Thanks For Your Story

God Bless,

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thanks Ali for your passing by and may Allah bless you :)

THE WIFE SAID THAT SHE HAD THE SAME IMPRESSION ABOUT THE STRANGER AND THAT SHE DIDN'T BELIEVE HIS STORY EITHER BUT SHE ASKED THE FATHER TO BE MORE CAREFUL
. THEY WENT TO SLEEP .
NEXT MORNING WHEN THEY WOKE UP THE MAN WAS GONE BUT DIDN'T TAKE HIS SACK WITH HIM . THE LITTLE BOY TRIED TO OPEN IT BUT HIS FATHER PREVENTED HIM AND HE TOOK THE SACK AND HID IT IN HIS CASE.
WHEN THE MOTHER FETCHED FOR HER NECKLACE , SHE DIDN'T FIND IT . SHE WENT OUT SCREAMING
--DID ANY ONE SEE MY NECKLACE?? I PUT IT IN MY BOX

TO BE CONTINUED

Thanx TAIF
I'm prosecuting
=D>=D>

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المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة الع ـوام ـ Mـى

Thanx TAIF
I'm prosecuting
=D>=D>

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OH;;) THANKS SOOOOOOOOO MUCH 3AWAMY --BELIEVE ME IT'S A PLEASURE TO ME WHEN YOU READ WHAT I WRITE I'M REALLY HONORED

THE WIFE FELT VERY SAD AND MISREABLE SINCE SHE WAS PLANNING TO SELL THE NECKLACE AND TO HELP HER HUSBAND PAY FOR HIS DEBT AND SAVE THEIR HOUSE BY PAYING THE MORTGAGE WHICH WAS ON IT
THE FATHER WAS SHOCKED AND HE KNEW THAT IT WAS THE STRANGE VISITOR WHO STOLE THE MOTHER'S NECKLACE
HE FELT SO UNHAPPY AND WENT OUT TO LOOK FOR THE STRANGER BUT UNFORTUNATELY , HE FOUND NOTHING
SO HE WENT BACK HOME

HE WENT TO HIS ROOM AND CLOSED THE DOOR BEHIND HIM.
HIS WIFE FOLLOWED HIM AND THEY DIDN'T TALK AT ALL.
THEY THOUGHT THAT NOW THEY NEEDED TO SELL THEIR HOUSE TO PAY THE MORTGAGE .
THEY FELT DEEPLY SAD AND TOLD THEIR CHILDREN TO BE READY TO LEAVE THE HOUSE .
THE CHILDREN WERE SO SAD AND STARTED CRYING .
NEXT MORNING WHILE THEY WERE PACKING THEIR THINGS.......................

hi,hi,hi
I'm waiting
and sad for her necklace
Thanks prencess TAIF
=D>=D>

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المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة الع ـوام ـ Mـى

hi,hi,hi
I'm waiting
and sad for her necklace
Thanks prencess TAIF
=D>=D>

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THANKS 3AWAMI I REALLY DON'T KNOW HOW TO THANK YOU

THEY SAW SOMEONE APPROACHING THEIR HOUSE . THE LITTLE BOY WAS SO SCARED THAT IT WAS THE STRANGER SO HE STARTED SCREAMING

IT'S THE STRANGER

IT'S THE STRANGER

THE FATHER RAN QUICKLY TOWARDS HIM AND HELD HIM FROM HIS SHIRT AND WANTED TO BEAT HIM.
THE STRANGER THEN SHOUTED

WAIT ...WAIT

LISTEN TO ME
I'LL TELL YOU EVERYTHING

JUST LET ME SIT AND BRING ME A GLASS OF WATER

HE DRANK THEN LOOKED AT THE OWNER OF THE HOUSE AND ASKED HIM

WHERE IS YOUR FATHER

HE WAS SURPRISED FROM THE QUESTION AND SAID .....
MY FATHER WAS SENT TO PRISON 10 YEARS AGO

THE STRANGER THEN ASKED

COULD YOU TELL ME WHY

NO ! IT'S NOT YOUR BUISNESS

THE STRANGER THEN SAID

OK ...I KNOW YOUR FATHER'S STORY ..HE WAS SENT TO PRISON BECAUSE HE STOLE SOME MONEY

NO ! THE MAN SHOUTED ..HE DIDN'T STEAL THEM ..THEY WERE STOLEN FROM OUR HOUSE
THE PEOPLE IN THE VILLAGE USED TO SAVE MONEY WITH MY FATHER IN ORDER TO BUILD A FACTORY BUT MY FATHER LOST THEM SO HE WAS IMPRISONED

COULD YOU TELL ME MORE ? THE STRANGER ASKED

OK ..I' LL TELL YOU EVERYTHING BUT FIRST YOU HAVE TO TELL ME WHO YOU ARE

OK SON I'LL TELL YOU

I USED TO BE THE GUARD OF THE PRISON AND I LIKED YOUR FATHER AND I WAS SURE THAT HE WAS INNOCENT SO BY THE TIME WE BECAME VERY CLOSE FRIENDS
ONE DAY HE TOLD ME HIS STORY AND I FELT SO SAD FOR HIM

HE SAID THAT HIS SON --THAT IS YOU --USED TO TRUST EVERY ONE AND THAT HE WARNED YOU TO BE MORE CAREFUL FROM STRANGERS BUT YOU NEVER LISTENED TO HIS ADVICE

ONE DAY A STRANGER VISITED YOU AND YOU LET HIM IN SO HE STOLE THE MONEY WHICH YOUR FATHER HID FOR THE VILLAGERS SO THEY ACCUSED HIM AND HE WAS SENT TO PRISON FOR 15 YEARS

YOUR FATHER WANTED TO MAKE SURE THAT YOU LEARNED SOMETHING FROM WHAT HAPPENED
HE GOT SO ILL AND BEFORE HE DIED HE ASKED ME TO SEE IF YOU ARE OK NOW AND IF YOU ARE MORE CAREFUL NOW

SO I DECIDED TO MAKE THIS TRICK ON YOU

UNFORTUENATLY YOU DIDN'T CHANGE AT ALL AND YOU STILL TRUST STRANGERS

LISTEN TO ME SON --IT'S OK TO HELP PEOPLE BUT YOU SHOULD BE MORE CAREFUL

THE FAMILY LISTENED TO THE STRANGER'S WORDS AND APPROVED

AND NOW--SAID THE STRANGER-- BRING ME MY SACK
I HAVE A SURPRISE FROM YOUR FATHER

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WoW .. really wow
what a story .. bravo Teif
i though in the begining it's just an INDIAN MOVIE that all of us saw before
but this one is cool
=D>=D>=D>=D>
but i have a question .. how did the stranger know the owner of that house
didn' open his sack or sell its things
anyway i'm waiting for the rest
:)
YAAAAA RAB
:D

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المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة AhMeD El-Za3eEm

WoW .. really wow
what a story .. bravo Teif
i though in the begining it's just an INDIAN MOVIE that all of us saw before
but this one is cool
=D>=D>=D>=D>
but i have a question .. how did the stranger know the owner of that house
didn' open his sack or sell its things
anyway i'm waiting for the rest
:)
YAAAAA RAB
:D

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Thanx Ahmad for the encouragement
and all your questions will be answered
I'm so glad that you enjoyed it

THE LITTLE BOY BROUGHT THE SACK FROM HIS FATHER'S CHEST AND HANDED IT TO THE STRANGER WHO OPENED IT IMMEDIATELY.........

FIRST HE GOT OUT THE NECKLACE AND HANDED IT TO THE WIFE WHO WAS SO HAPPY
THEN HE TOOK OUT A LETTER FROM THE FATHER TO HIS SON AND FINALLY HE GOT OUT AN ENVELOPE WHICH CONTAINED A LOT OF MONEY

THE STRANGER THEN LOOKED AT THE OWNER OF THE HOUSE AND SAID
AFTER FIVE YEARS FROM THE DAY YOUR FATHER WAS IMPRISONED , THE POLICE CAUGHT THE REAL THIEF
AND YOUR FATHER GOT OUT FROM PRISON AND WANTED TO GET BACK TO HIS HOME
BUT UNFORTUNATELY HE WAS SO ILL
SO HE GAVE ME YOUR ADDRESS AND YOUR NAME AND ASKED ME TO GIVE YOU THE MONEY
THE NEXT DAY YOUR FATHER DIED I BURIED HIM AND CONTINUED MY JOURNEY TO YOUR VILLAGE

I WANTED TO TEACH YOU A LESSON AND I HOPE THAT YOU LEARNED IT

AND NOW HERE IS THE MONEY WHICH WAS STOLEN FROM YOUR FATHER SO YOU SHOULD TAKE YOURS AND GIVE THE REST TO THE PEOPLE IN THE VILLAGE

AND NOW OPEN YOUR FATHER'S LETTER

thankx Teif .. can' wait till the end of that story

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المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة AhMeD El-Za3eEm

thankx Teif .. can' wait till the end of that story

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thanks Ahmad for the encouragement and INA I'll finish it tomorrow

I HOPE .. I REALLY DO
:)

THANKS AGAIN AND AGAIN
AHMAD

WHEN HE OPENED THE LETTER HE FELT SO SAD AS HE REMEMBERED HIS FATHER

HIS WIFE ASKED HIM TO READ IT LOUDLY

SO HE DID

DEAR SON
IT'S ALWAYS OK TO HELP OTHERS AND FEEL WITH THEM BUT YOU NEED TO BE MORE CAREFUL WHEN YOU DEAL WITH OTHERS --TRUST ONLY THOSE WHOM YOU KNOW WELL AND NEVER PUT YOUR TRUST IN ONES WHOM YOU DON'T KNOW MUCH ABOUT THEM
DEAR SON
MAY BE I PAID MY LIFE A PRICE FOR TRUSTING THE WRONG PERSON , I DON'T REALLY CARE , IT'S MY DESTINY AND I CAN'T REFUSE IT OR DO ANYTHING ABOUT IT BUT
IT WOULDN'T BE A LOSS
IF YOU GOT THE LESSON WELL

NOW YOU HAVE LOTS OF MONEY , GO ON , START A NEW LIFE WITH YOUR FAMILY , TEACH THEM TO LOVE AND NEVER TO HATE
TEACH THEM TO OBEY ALLAH AND TO BE CAREFUL WHILE DEALING WITH STRANGERS

MAY ALLAH BLESS YOU ALL

THE END

=D>
Your Story is wow .. bravo Teif
And I really enjoyed it .. Thankx so much

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المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة AhMeD El-Za3eEm

=D>
Your Story is wow .. bravo Teif
And I really enjoyed it .. Thankx so much

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THANKS AHMAD YOU REALLY ENCOURAGED ME TO KEEP ON

I'M REALLY SO OBLIGED TO YOU

Really nice story
Thanks TAIF
I think It wasn't loosing my life,If i achieved my purpose
=D>=D>
Really nice story of nice writer

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المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة الع ـوام ـ Mـى

Really nice story
Thanks TAIF
I think It wasn't loosing my life,If i achieved my purpose
=D>=D>
Really nice story of nice writer

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thanks a lot 3awamy , I'm so obliged to you for encouraging me