once upon a time ...short story --by me

[طيف عابر]

WoW .. really wow
what a story .. bravo Teif
i though in the begining it's just an INDIAN MOVIE that all of us saw before
but this one is cool

but i have a question .. how did the stranger know the owner of that house
didn' open his sack or sell its things
anyway i'm waiting for the rest

YAAAAA RAB

Thanx Ahmad for the encouragement
and all your questions will be answered
I'm so glad that you enjoyed it

[طيف عابر]

THE LITTLE BOY BROUGHT THE SACK FROM HIS FATHER'S CHEST AND HANDED IT TO THE STRANGER WHO OPENED IT IMMEDIATELY.........

FIRST HE GOT OUT THE NECKLACE AND HANDED IT TO THE WIFE WHO WAS SO HAPPY
THEN HE TOOK OUT A LETTER FROM THE FATHER TO HIS SON AND FINALLY HE GOT OUT AN ENVELOPE WHICH CONTAINED A LOT OF MONEY

THE STRANGER THEN LOOKED AT THE OWNER OF THE HOUSE AND SAID
AFTER FIVE YEARS FROM THE DAY YOUR FATHER WAS IMPRISONED , THE POLICE CAUGHT THE REAL THIEF
AND YOUR FATHER GOT OUT FROM PRISON AND WANTED TO GET BACK TO HIS HOME
BUT UNFORTUNATELY HE WAS SO ILL
SO HE GAVE ME YOUR ADDRESS AND YOUR NAME AND ASKED ME TO GIVE YOU THE MONEY
THE NEXT DAY YOUR FATHER DIED I BURIED HIM AND CONTINUED MY JOURNEY TO YOUR VILLAGE

I WANTED TO TEACH YOU A LESSON AND I HOPE THAT YOU LEARNED IT

AND NOW HERE IS THE MONEY WHICH WAS STOLEN FROM YOUR FATHER SO YOU SHOULD TAKE YOURS AND GIVE THE REST TO THE PEOPLE IN THE VILLAGE

AND NOW OPEN YOUR FATHER'S LETTER

[AhMeD El-Za3eEm]

thankx Teif .. can' wait till the end of that story

[طيف عابر]

thankx Teif .. can' wait till the end of that story

thanks Ahmad for the encouragement and INA I'll finish it tomorrow

[AhMeD El-Za3eEm]

I HOPE .. I REALLY DO

[طيف عابر]

THANKS AGAIN AND AGAIN
AHMAD

[طيف عابر]

WHEN HE OPENED THE LETTER HE FELT SO SAD AS HE REMEMBERED HIS FATHER

HIS WIFE ASKED HIM TO READ IT LOUDLY

SO HE DID

DEAR SON
IT'S ALWAYS OK TO HELP OTHERS AND FEEL WITH THEM BUT YOU NEED TO BE MORE CAREFUL WHEN YOU DEAL WITH OTHERS --TRUST ONLY THOSE WHOM YOU KNOW WELL AND NEVER PUT YOUR TRUST IN ONES WHOM YOU DON'T KNOW MUCH ABOUT THEM
DEAR SON
MAY BE I PAID MY LIFE A PRICE FOR TRUSTING THE WRONG PERSON , I DON'T REALLY CARE , IT'S MY DESTINY AND I CAN'T REFUSE IT OR DO ANYTHING ABOUT IT BUT
IT WOULDN'T BE A LOSS
IF YOU GOT THE LESSON WELL

NOW YOU HAVE LOTS OF MONEY , GO ON , START A NEW LIFE WITH YOUR FAMILY , TEACH THEM TO LOVE AND NEVER TO HATE
TEACH THEM TO OBEY ALLAH AND TO BE CAREFUL WHILE DEALING WITH STRANGERS

MAY ALLAH BLESS YOU ALL

THE END

[AhMeD El-Za3eEm]

Your Story is wow .. bravo Teif
And I really enjoyed it .. Thankx so much

[طيف عابر]

Your Story is wow .. bravo Teif
And I really enjoyed it .. Thankx so much

THANKS AHMAD YOU REALLY ENCOURAGED ME TO KEEP ON

I'M REALLY SO OBLIGED TO YOU

[العوامى]

Really nice story
Thanks TAIF
I think It wasn't loosing my life,If i achieved my purpose

Really nice story of nice writer