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    افتراضي once upon a time ...short story --by me

    ALSALLAM 3ALIKOM

    YOU MAY SHARE --IF YOU WISH- AND WRITE A SHORT STORY OF YOUR OWN
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    THE STRANGE VISITOR
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    ONCE UPON A TIME , THERE WAS A VERY HAPPY FAMILY WHO LIVED PEACEFULLY AND HAPPILY . THEY WERE SO CONTENT WITH WHAT ALLAH BESTOWED THEM .THERE WERE TWO BOYS , A GIRL AND THE PARENTS . THE FATHER WAS A COLLIER . THEY WERE POOR BUT SO HAPPY

    ONE DAY , SOMEONE KNOCKED AT THEIR DOOR . THE MOTHER WAS SO SCARED AND HER HEART STATED BEATING FAST . SHE WAS WORRIED BUT DIDN'T UNDERSTAND WHY THAT FEELING OCCURRED TO HER.
    THE LITTLE BOY WENT QUICKLY TO OPEN THE DOOR . HIS MOTHER TRIED TO STOP HIM . BUT THE FATHER LOOKED AT HER AND WAS SO ASTONISHED FROM HER BEHAVIOR SO SHE LET THE BOY OPEN THE DOOR
    .
    TO BE CONTINUED

    TAIF 3ABER
    التعديل الأخير تم بواسطة طيف عابر ; 17 - 2 - 2008 الساعة 10:37 AM

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    افتراضي رد: once upon a time ...short story --by me

    Hey come on
    TO BE CONTINUED
    I thought i would read the end .. then u wrote that
    anyway thankx 4 ur topic and waiting to see who knocked that door
    thankx Teif
    SomeTimes It's Hard To Keep On SomeThing
    That's Life .. Nothing remains ForEver

    But What Life can't change or Clear
    The Great Moments We shared One Day

    Life Can Separate Lovers, Friends even Families
    But In The Heart They will always Be in There

    We Know People appreciate Them without Seeing Them
    Though They Affected Us Deep What Make Us Thankful

    WON' 4GET U .. WISH U THE BEST

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    افتراضي رد: once upon a time ...short story --by me

    Hey come on
    TO BE CONTINUED
    I thought i would read the end .. then u wrote that
    anyway thankx 4 ur topic and waiting to see who knocked that door
    thankx Teif
    SomeTimes It's Hard To Keep On SomeThing
    That's Life .. Nothing remains ForEver

    But What Life can't change or Clear
    The Great Moments We shared One Day

    Life Can Separate Lovers, Friends even Families
    But In The Heart They will always Be in There

    We Know People appreciate Them without Seeing Them
    Though They Affected Us Deep What Make Us Thankful

    WON' 4GET U .. WISH U THE BEST

    البحث على جميع مواضيع العضو AhMeD El-Za3eEm

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    افتراضي رد: once upon a time ...short story --by me



    ok --I promise you that you'll read it soon

    may be after a month from now thanx Ahmad

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    افتراضي رد: once upon a time ...short story --by me

    when the boy opened the door , a strange looking man was standing there , he was carrying a sack on his back . the man asked for some water to drink , the boy was so scared from the man. He went quickly to his father and told him about the man's request. The father gave the man water . After he drank it , he asked for some food.The father asked the man to get in the house and to have a rest.
    he sat on a chair and put the sack beside him . They gave him food and while he was eating the father asked him where he was from....

    to be continued

    التعديل الأخير تم بواسطة طيف عابر ; 18 - 2 - 2008 الساعة 11:29 AM

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    افتراضي رد: once upon a time ...short story --by me

    The man was disturbed and awkward from the question and said

    --I'm not from this town .I am a stranger and I came here to buy some necessary things for my shop

    --The father wished the man good luck and asked him hf he needed help
    the stranger looked at the father and said
    --- yes ! could I stay here for this night only
    --The father felt embarrassed and agreed
    he led the stranger to a small room and gave him a blanket then he closed the door behind him and went to rest
    the father looked at his wife and asked her

    --do you think this man is telling the truth ?? I don't like his story and I don't think he is telling the truth


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    to be continued

    التعديل الأخير تم بواسطة طيف عابر ; 19 - 2 - 2008 الساعة 12:11 PM

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    افتراضي رد: once upon a time ...short story --by me

    To be late is better than never comming
    Thanks TAIF
    I'm so interrested your story
    and w8

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    افتراضي رد: once upon a time ...short story --by me

    Thanks For Your Story

    God Bless,
    رَبِّ أَوْزِعْنِي أَنْ أَشْكُرَ نِعْمَتَكَ الَّتِي أَنْعَمْتَ عَلَيَّ وَعَلَى وَالِدَيَّ وَأَنْ أَعْمَلَ صَالِحاً تَرْضَاهُ وَأَدْخِلْنِي بِرَحْمَتِكَ فِي عِبَادِكَ الصَّالِحِينَ

    البحث على جميع مواضيع العضو علي مدكور

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    افتراضي رد: once upon a time ...short story --by me

    اقتباس المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة الع ـوام ـ Mـى مشاهدة المشاركة
    To be late is better than never comming
    Thanks TAIF
    I'm so interrested your story
    and w8

    thanks a lot 3awami for passing by ---I'm soooo happy that you enjoyed it
    it's a pleasure for me really
    التعديل الأخير تم بواسطة طيف عابر ; 20 - 2 - 2008 الساعة 11:10 AM

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    اقتباس المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة علي مدكور مشاهدة المشاركة
    Thanks For Your Story

    God Bless,
    thanks Ali for your passing by and may Allah bless you

 

 
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